Passive Voice : It was posted ontheir personal website, by Trey Parker and Matt Strone, that they will with-hold episodes unless Comedy central re-airs the series’ unless Comedy Central re-airs the series’ 200th episode.
correction… Trey Parker and Matt Strone posted on the website that they will with-hold episodes unless Comedy central re-airs the series’ unless Comedy Central re-airs the series’ 200th episode.
Comma placement / Mispelling Names : In resposne, a writer on the website, revolutionmuslim.com, warned that Park and Stone “might suffer the same fate as Theo Van Gogh”
Corrections : In resposne, a writer on the website revolutionmuslim.com warned that Parker and Stone “might suffer the same fate as Theo Van Gogh”
splitting leads : The creators of the controversial cartoon “South Park” are threatening to quit producing the show. They are complaining that their network, Comedy Central, censored an episode depicting Muhammad.
Correction : The creators of the controversial cartoon “South Park” are threatening to quit producing the show; They are complaining that their network, Comedy Central, censored an episode depicting Muhammad.
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dkois May 6th, 2010 at 1:34 pm
Don’t capitalize after semicolons! 6/6